Scenes From Our Lifes

[Miss_Innocent]

This is my 2nd poem i am writing here in this forum
show me ur comments pls :39:​

Scenes From Our Lifes​

Boldy will they be
To show interest they say
To Express love they think
To be strong they pretend
At the end ......Brother hood they ment
Fooling whom they think?0
And the victom wonders......00
Serious are they or not​

But i will tell you​

No victom!..... Be wise must be
Ignorance to be taken
Not for long then hurt is caused
To cure the pain will take time
I Wonder.........0
If they wish no harm to their family , then why harm to cause to victoms.....?0
A man`s words to be spoken
To show love and respect to you and your family
Loyality and faith must be withen them
Mistakes might be done in past, but corrections to be placed in now
To open a white page they promise
Filled with faith and loyality
No perfection we ask for
Only faith and loyality in feelings
Which lasts forever......0​

 

[نـــدى الـورد]

loved it

keep going

thanks alot dear

 

[Miss_Innocent]

:26:

Thank u so much, motivation is what we need
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[قمه على قمه]

WOW..
I love your style in writing..
and your poem is very profound
Keep on writing.. you are very talented..

 

[Miss_Innocent]

Thank u so much 4 ur lovely words..........just like u:20:
In shaa allah ill keep on goin to improve my writings in future
:39:​

 

[Miss_Innocent]

للرفع

 

[جونار]

Here you are again my Miss:32: .....your poem today is realistic my favorite:24:.your theme is about hypocrisy and brotherhood which appear clearly those days. you are truely right.....only faith and loyality last for ever

 

[Miss_Innocent]

جونار
Thank u v.much, i appreciate ur comments