Innocese..........0

[Miss_Innocent]

This is my first participation in this one the best and lovely forums i wish of you would read my first poem which i wrote it 1 year ago and i ll be very happy to hear your comments ​

Regards​

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INNOCENSE​

An angle flying with its glittery wings​

Spreding its glitter to the surroundings​

Some may like it,,,,Ssome may not​

Who like it,,they know it will affect them​

Because it will change them to be pure​

Within them selves............0​

Who wont like it they wont feel it​

Simply they dont understand the spiritual meaning of it​

And some of them try to throw arrows back to it​

It reaches and hurts deeply and the Angle falls.............0​

For some time..........0​

And stands up to spread the glitter again​

But carefully.........0​

:19:​

 

[Miss_Innocent]

ولا اي رد لين الحين ؟

 

[Miss_Innocent]

:22:أوكي انا حشرح المعنى​

في هذي الشعر تخيلت ملاك تطير ، بضحكتها و برائتها تحب تنشر الخير لكل الناس و تسعدهم
في ناس تستوعب و تتقبلها و في ناس للأسف ما تتقبلها و بدل ما تشكرها يقوموا يجرحوها
هي حتتألم منهم و بياخد وقت لين تلتئم جرحها و اول ما يلتئم الجرح حتقوم تاني مرة تطير و تنشر الخير بس بحذر​

اتمنى اني وصلت رسالتي ​

 

[No 1 Noo]

dear the meaning is clear but i think it has

some mistakes with our Islamic cred​

 

[Miss_Innocent]

حبيبتي انا مش كان قصدي من هذه الناحية
It is just an imaginative thought like what we see in fairy tales , if i ll write a poem which is related to our islamic cred first i have to be more proffesional in writing poems as i have mentioned that it is my first poem
i hope u understood me
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